托福独立口语批改分享 托福考试

　　考生在备考独立口语时常会遇到的一个问题是缺乏专业靠谱的权威人士来为自己批改答案。大家可能练习了不少独立口语话题，但因为缺乏有效批改，就连自己也不知道练习到底有没有成效。下面小编就来为大家分享一些来自托福资深讲师针对独立口语高频话题学生答案的专业批改。
　　 本期托福独立口语高频话题Do you think that it's a waste of time for university students to take non-major courses?
　　学生对此话题的表述答案
　　I don't think it's a waste of time for a university student to take other courses outside of their major. First, I think studying another course outside their major can spark their creativity. Because the combination of different major can teach us different thinking methods, which can improve our creativity. For example, for the student who study the marketing, when they gain some knowledge in the internet. They can creative the on-line shopping model. which is the fashion in our morden society. And second thing is students can broaden their mind through the studying another course outside their major.
　　 资深讲师批改意见发音部分需注意的几个词 ( Pronunciation )
　　1 because
　　2 method
　　3 gain
　　4 ( last sentence )
　　语法方面出现的错误 ( Grammar )
　　1 different major ———— different majors
　　2 ( run on sentences )

　　3 study the marketing ———— is studying marketing
　　表达部分存在的问题 ( Expression )
　　1 I do think it's a waste …———— I do not think it's a waste …
　　2 thinking method ———— method of thinking
　　3 when they gain some knowledge in the internet ———— can gain some knowledge of the internet
　　4 they can creative ———— can create
　　 此高频话题高分口语模板分享I do not think it's a waste of time for university students to take a course outside their major. First, I think studying another course outside their major can spark their creativity. The combination of different majors can teach us different methods of thinking, which can improve our creativity. For example, a student who is studying marketing can gain some knowledge of the internet. They can create an on-line shopping model, which is used in morden society.