雅思写作中如何避免那些易错点

　　怎么样的开头是“见官死”的开头呢？写作中有哪些坑是不能跳的呢？
　　“见官死”开头之一：云里雾里 废话连篇
　　Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?
　　This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about thistopic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……
　　Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the bookor the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真题)
　　Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I havea friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet toread news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and moreimportant in our daily life.
　　Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection
　　Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s reallyvery very important!
　　“见官死”开头之二：中式英文人见人晕
　　Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life
　　In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart floweropened angrily……
　　Topic 2- The population problem
　　The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the citycenters of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.
　　Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?
　　I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. Forexample, I always chopped when I go out buy things……
　　Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person
　　Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always dobad things, he will get “baoying”.
　　“见官死”开头之三：观点模糊态度暧昧
　　Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?
　　I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little,only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……
　　“见官死”开头之四：偏离主题无轨电车
　　Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire thequalifications and quality essential to success through university education. Towhat extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真题)
　　I think to success, we must have a lot of importantqualities. To havethese important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English,music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, ourfriends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

　　“见官死”开头之五：语法错误惨不忍睹
　　Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents acceptresponsibility and also be punished? (雅思真题)
　　About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents arenot right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punishparents too besides children is also should.