雅思写作中经常犯哪些错误呢

　　今天我们说说写作中的常犯错误有什么，保证让你练成火眼金睛！我们先来检查下面的句子是否正确，有错误挑出来：是不是觉得有些句子似曾相识，惊呼我就是这么写的呀！没毛病呀！不，还是有些问题的。我们来看一下分析：
　　句子1：Exercise regularly can rise one's confidence.
　　错误 1 Exercise 如果这里是动词，应该用动名词，如果是名词，不能用副词修饰
　　错误 2 rise 不及物动词
　　正确的句子1：Regular exercise can increase one’s self-confidence.
　　正确的句子2：Exercising regularlycan increase one’s self-confidence.
　　句子2：Online shopping is becoming more and more popular, as a result, consumers can buy a large variety of goods.
　　错误：独立的句子之间相连，需要有连词。as a result, therefore, then这种词看着像连词，其实都属于介词短语或副词，不能连接两个句子
　　正确的句子：Online shopping is becoming more and more popular. As a result, consumers can buy a large variety of goods.
　　句子3：It is dangerous to imprison minor criminals with adult ones who is likely to have a negative effect on the youth.
　　错误：定语从句谓语需要和先行词保持一致
　　正确的句子：It is dangerous to imprison minor criminals with adult ones who are likely to have a negative effect on the youth.
　　句子4：There are various other measures could be implemented.
　　错误：there be 句型本身就是完整的句子，不能再出现其它谓语动词，需要使用定语从句或者分词来修饰名词 measures
　　正确的句子：There are various other measures that could be implemented.
　　句子5：The proportion of people stay in Britain have increased.
　　错误：句子里面不能出现两个谓语动词 stay 和 increased，如果有两个谓语动词，可以做成从句，或者使用分词。
　　正确的句子1：The proportion of people who stay in Britain hasincreased.
　　正确的句子2：The proportion of people staying in Britain hasincreased.
　　句子6：The flower is the most important part of a plant, it contains the seeds that enable the plant to reproduce.
　　错误： 具有独立意义的两个句子需要用句号相隔，或者用连词连接
　　正确的句子1：The flower is the most important part of a plant. It contains the seeds that enable the plant to reproduce.

　　正确的句子2：The flower is the most important part of a plant,and it contains the seeds that enable the plant to reproduce.
　　句子7：For children who watch TV for more than 5 hours per day would have poor physical condition, compared with those who do more outdoor activities.
　　错误： 加了 for 以后变成了介词短语，变成了句子的状语，导致这句话没有了主语。介词短语不能作为句子主语。
　　正确的句子：Children who watch TV for more than 5 hours per day would have poor physical condition, compared with those who do more outdoor activities.
　　看了解析之后是不是一下就明白了，那么来波练习巩固一下吧
　　1.They believe that provide the public with more informations on climate change is a waste of money.
　　2.Crime rates would be declined if security measures could be risen.
　　3.Schools should provide more support and resources to student who lack for confidence in maths.
　　4.A large number of people would migrate to big cities, in that case, the countryside would lack of workforce.