雅思大作文写作中使用的用法该注意的问题

　　今天我给大家讲解一下雅思大作文写作中使用的用法该注意的问题。希望对大家的学习有所帮助。
　　我们先来看一个正确的句子：
　　As for teachers, it is more convenient for them to choose appropriate materials and activities according to students’ levels.（As for后的宾语和后边句子的主语不同。）
　　但在写作中，很多同学使用这些词写的句子会使语义重复啰嗦。
　　比如：
　　1. For many people living in big cities, they have to spend most of their time working.（for后的宾语many people，和后边句子的主语they是相同的）
　　可以简化为：
　　People living in big cities have to spend most of their time working.

　　2. As for me, I hold the view that ...（as for 的宾语me，和后边句子的主语I是相同的）
　　可以简化为：
　　I hold the view that ...
　　请同学们简化下边句子：
　　For most young people, they depend on the support from their grandparents and babysitters for childcare.
　　参考答案：
　　Most young people depend on the support from their grandparents and babysitters for childcare.