论雅思写作高分之语法重要性 雅思阅读

　　论雅思写作高分之语法重要性。句式多样性那是否意味着句式多样性就不重要了呢？并不是，句式多样性也重要，但是并非背诵那些神句！而是将简单句应用连词拼接成复杂句。 我们来看一下雅思的评分标准对于句式的要求：-Band 4: limited range of structures, rare use of subordinate clauses
　　-Band 5: attempts complex sentences
　　-Band 6: uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms
　　-Bands 7 to 9: variety of complex structures, wide range of structures
　　有没有注意到评分标准并没有指明说到你要用if conditional， 被动，虚拟语气， 动名词，或者那些所谓的高大上的动词时态？
　　意味着你不应该将注意力集中于把那些神句式塞进你的作文！
　　IELTSMENTORS的 tips:只要注意将您的几个简单句连接成更长的句子，就 OK了。通过不同的连词的应用，您就自动的将句子变成了那些所谓的长难句。
　　练习下面我们来看几篇文章，童鞋们可以大家来找茬找出文中的语法错误，并且自行为它们的 GRA 评分：
　　P1)
　　It is cannot be denied that people should learn from history, as history has its own values. If welook at the developing process ina global scale, it is obvious that some less developed countries may facingcurrent issueswhich are those moredevelopedcountriesthat had happenedseveral years ago. For example, the environmental pollution issue in Chinacompare withSweden. Therefore,people can learn from othercountries historybut need takinginto account the scale andculturaldifference.

　　P2)
　　On the other hand, if theyleave school early, they will notgot betteropportunities, low-paid, low-levelsand boring. For example, working in MacDonald's. One ofsignificantpoint children should be moreambitious tocontinue their education and higher education.P3) There is a good range of reasons to believe why sports programs on television may have a detrimental impact on young adult’s health. Firstly, it is evident that watching sportscasts in front of a screen is far less physically demanding than participating in person, and this can easily explain why the number of young people doing physical exercises is on the decline. Secondly, the vast amount of time in which young people indulge themselves with these sports broadcasts can invariably cause a severe visual impairment, thereby leading to a growing number of adolescents suffering from myopia. And finally, by spending hours ontelevision, there is a tendency for a sedentary lifestyle, which would ultimately result in serious health problems such as obesity, poor digestion and an increased risk of developmental disorders. In this sense, televisionsports programs are arguably associated with these health concerns.P4)
　　Some people assert that talent is a natural gift and cannot be learnt. For instance, MichaelJackson was born with a good singing voice, as hestarted to sing at age offive. Another example of talented people is Pele. We can see that Pele is considered as the king of the football because he had a natural ability to play football, and started playing itsince he was three years old. In addition, apart from sport and music there are some people that are good at maths.For example, the youngest person that enrolled at university was an American boy at the age of12, because he was good with numbers.