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托福口语特别是独立口语的备考,考生多接触各类话题并且进行回答结构的构思训练是很有必要的。只有遭遇过大量口语话题并且积累足够经验,大家才能避免被突如其来的陌生话题偷袭。而下面小编就将为大家带来一些托福独立口语话题的高分模板和参考范文,一起来学习一下吧。

  托福口语特别是独立口语的备考,考生多接触各类话题并且进行回答结构的构思训练是很有必要的。只有遭遇过大量口语话题并且积累足够经验,大家才能避免被突如其来的陌生话题偷袭。而下面小编就将为大家带来一些托福独立口语话题的高分模板和参考范文,一起来学习一下吧。
   本期托福独立口语话题Choose one of the forms of the technology in the list and explain how it changes ( has great impact on ) people's lives in your country?
  a. airplane
  b. computer
  c. television
  托福独立口语参考范文
  I think computer has great impact on people ’ s lives in my country. First, it has greatly changed the way of searching information. In the past, people looked for information mainly by going to the library to find certain books, which often costs them such a long time to get what they want. But now, you just have to type some key words in search engines to get whatever you want immediately. It is much faster than before. Second, it is very convenient for people to keep in contact with each other, even when living in different countries. It breaks the limitation of distance. For example, my relatives are living in the US now, but we still can chat with each other through FaceTime to share our daily life.
   托福口独立语模板分析上文中如下内容值得学习:
  1.【形容词很高级】I think computer has the great impact on people ’ s lives in my country. 如果后边是 greatest 那这是形容词很高级,就必须加 the,但既然这里不是用很高级,那就不用加 the 了。
  life 这个词,如果当 " 人的生活 " 讲,则不可数,如:everyday life, daily life; 但如果当 " 人的一生 " 讲,那就既可以可数,又可以不可数,如:in people ’ s life/ lives 都是对哒 ! 不过,在写作中请一定不要忘记 life 的复数形式是不规则变化,不是简单加 s。
  2.【动词时态】First, it has greatly changed the way of searching information. 原来的说法是忘记了单数,但是即使改成了 changes,这个时态还是不够准确。其实是技术【已经】改变了我们搜寻信息的方式——从搜索引擎面世的那一刻开始——这是【过去发生的】事情,对【现在】有影响,用现在完成时会更加准确。

  不过,像这种 it 做理由主旨句主语的写法,建议不要用到写作中。因为这样容易指代不清。建议大家明确写清楚主语。
  3. 【平行结构】原来的说法 In the past, people looked for information mainly by going to the library, finding the certain books and then got what they want. 前面都是 by doing sth. 的方式状语在并列:by going, finding 那这个 and 后边也应该是 doing sth. 才对。但又不能直接说:by going, finding and getting 因为并不是 by getting what they want,实际上 get what they want 是之后的【结果】,而非过程中所采取的方式。因此改为:going to the library to find certain books, which often costs them such a long time to get what they want
  4.【固定搭配】type some key words on in search engines to 这里请注意:type sth. in ( = write information on a computer ) 意思就是 " 把……键入 ( 计算机 ) ",介词是 in 不是 on,可以这样记忆 " 把……键【入】",所以是 in。
  5.【形容词比较级】It is much more faster than before. 这里请注意,经常见到有同学写出这样的句子,much more 形容词比较级。这里的 much 是副词,可以保留,用来修饰形容词比较级 ; 而 more 是专门和多音节的形容词放在一起组成比较级,如 more comfortable。这里已经 faster,所以不用再加 more。
  6.【用词不当】Second, it is very convenient for people to keep in contact with each ( others ) other, even when living in different countries.
  1 ) contact with sb. 的意思是是 " 和某人接触 ",但是无论是从 computer 的作用还是 Eling 后边的例子来看,这里想表达的都不是这个意思,而应该是 " 和某人保持联络 "。那么,可以用 stay/ keep in contact 来表达。
  2 ) each 的意思是就是 " 每一个 ",所以后边要接单数名词。这也是很多同学经常犯的错误之一。小编建议大家应该将 each other 这样的说法牢牢记住,形成条件反射,考场上就不会错了。
  7.【表达推荐】It breaks the limitation of distance. 也可以说 It removes the limitation on distance.
  8.【the 的用法】For example, my relatives are living in the US now, 因为 US 是 United States 的缩写,这种两个普通名词构成的专有名词前面一定要加 the,就比如:联合国 = the UN ( United Nations ) 英国 = the UK ( United Kingdom )
   托福独立口语参考答案分享I think computer has the great impact on people ’ s lives in my country.
  【计算机对我国人们的生活产生了巨大的影响】
  First, it has greatly changed the way of searching information. In the past, people looked for information mainly by going to the library to find certain books, which often costs them such a long time to get what they want. But now, you just have to type some key words on in search engines to get whatever you want immediately. It is much more faster than before.
  【它改变了我们搜索信息的方式,段内有例子、细节 古今对比】
  Second, it is very convenient for people to keep in contact with each others other, even when living in different countries. It breaks the limitation of distance. For example, my relatives are living in the US now, but we still can chat with each other through FaceTime to share our daily life.

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