托福写作范文点评和思路解析之生活节奏的选择 托福学习

　　托福写作遭遇陌生话题缺乏思路是比较让人头疼的一件事，考试中如果遇到自己完全不知道怎么写的题目可能会严重影响大家的发挥和心态。因此，考生需要在写作备考中就开始多接触各类作文话题了解写法思路，多读一些高分范文提前进行铺垫。下面小编就为大家带来托福写作难点话题的思路解析和高分范文赏析。
　　 托福写作难点话题一览Live life in a hurry or at a slower pace?
　　Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
　　 写作思路展开结构分析两个态度都片面。所以不要急于选择。我们真正希望的是，不慌不忙 ( with full composure ) ，却很有效率 ( efficient ) 。所以，小编更倾向于 careful planning。 [ 51 ] ，因为 careful planning 是成功的关键。另外，也要看是什么样的事情，工作、学习，都喜欢尽快结束 ( give it an end as quickly as possible ) ，但是与朋友消遣，与家人相伴，却不应该匆匆忙忙 ( bustle up ) ，而应该 at a slower pace。
　　 本话题高分范文赏析I used to live at a frantic pace. My wristwatch dictated my life, and the hands of the clock pushed me forward to my next appointment, my next assignment, and my next social engagement. However, I have managed to relax.
　　Now that I live my life at a slower pace I have become a better student, a more reliable friend, and a person who enjoys life much more than before. Living life at a slower pace has allowed me to pay much more attention to detail and to work through my assignments at school more thoroughly. Before I was always rushing through my reading and my writing, and my concentration was not very strong. The clubs and sports teams I belonged to demanded a lot of attention. After I decided to get rid of some of the more involved activities I had more time to focus on my studies and the results have shown in my marks.
　　While I am still busy with school and extra curricular activities, I also make a point of slowing down and taking a step back in order to prioritize the things in my life. This allows me to evaluate how much time I should spend on one thing or another. For example, while I was hurrying through my schedule I often lost track of my friends. I forgot about dates that we made and things that I agreed to do for them. This will not happen now. By slowing down the tempo and realizing how important my pals are to me, I have once again become a reliable friend.

　　Lastly, living life at a slower pace allows me to appreciate the good things in my life. In the past I would only think about the things I would have to get accomplished next. This anticipation did not allow me to concentrate on the moment, but now I am able to enjoy a family dinner or an afternoon at the movies with my friends without worrying about what I am supposed to do next.