雅思作文开头写法 雅思初级

　　相信了解雅思的同学们一定知道，雅思小作文也是套路慢慢，在我们熟悉了评分标准和研究过雅思考官的满分作文后，才发现雅思小作文只需要以下几步，轻松搞定。
　　热身阶段
　　1. 图表类型
　　柱状体、饼图、表格、线形图，地图和流程图
　　2. 写作要求
　　客观性，准确性，详尽性
　　3. 段落设置
　　进入正题
　　今天我们具体来说说雅思小作文开头段的修改规则
　　开头段的写法：改写 / 转述题目
　　同义替换
　　1. 同义词替换
　　2. 关键词词性、位置的转换
　　3. 时间、地点的改写
　　4. 名词和从句之间的相互转换
　　原题：The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
　　改后：The chart describes the percentage of diverse types （同义词替换）of poor families （改变关键词的位置和词性）in Australia in 1999.
　　show = describe/ illustrate/ demonstrate/
　　summarize/ outline/ indicate
　　give information about/compare
　　proportion = percentage
　　categories = kinds, types
　　families = households
　　families living in poverty = poor families
　　men and women = males and females
　　population = people
　　2. 时间、国家的改写。
　　原句：The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the U.S. and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999.
　　时间改写：
　　between March 1993 and March 1999
　　during the period from March 1993 to March 1999.
　　地点改写（具体 概括）
　　in the U.S. and Japan:
　　in two different countries
　　3. 名词和从句之间的相互转换
　　The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the U.S. and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999
　　N. how N. V. (change / fluctuate)
　　unemployment rates
　　how unemployment rates changed

　　总结阶段
　　末尾，我们通过一个题目来练习一下
　　The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
　　原题：The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries
　　改写1：The given line chart compares the percentage of aged people in Japan, Sweden and U.S.A. during the period from 1940 to 2040.
　　改写2：The main concern of the following graph is to present how aged people fluctuate in Japan, Sweden and U.S.A. during the period from 1940 to 2040.