2018年10月20日雅思A类写作高分范文

　　小站原创 | 10月20日雅思A类写作高分范文
　　原题回放：
　　The bar chart shows the results of a survey about different wards of a hospital and the percentages of patients who think “very good” of the experience of the hospital.
　　Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features，and make comparisons where relevant.
　　范文解析
　　该题目属于静态柱图。3W(when,where, what）中的时间没有给出，只说了是a survey，默认使用一般现在时态。地点是一家医院里面的三种病房。具体项目是四种方面的满意度比例。该题目既要对比三种病房的满意度差异，又要对比四个评估方面的差异。仔细观察图例可以发现，PollyWard在各方面都很突出，其次是Maple Ward, 而表现最差的是Oak Ward。建议可以尝试按照三种病房为主线，每一种病房单独描述。
　　范文
　　The bar chart compares satisfaction rates of patients from three wards of a hospital in terms of four respects，as illustratedfrom a survey.
　　Generally, Polly wardperforms the most extraordinary, asthe maximum proportionof patientsthink highly ofits service of staff, time waste, and quality of treatment and after care. Itstands in marked contrastwith Oak Ward which receives the least praise.
　　Specifically,the vast majority ofpatients (90%) are very satisfied with quality of treatment provided by Polly Ward,exceedingits service of staff and quality of aftercare by 5% while three quarters of people favor its time allocation.
　　Turning to Maple Ward, three quarters of people like its quality of treatment and after care while the service of staff ismarginally less preferable.Also noticeable isthat the least number of people (64%) are content with its time waste.
　　By contrast, the situationbecomes barely satisfactoryin Oak Ward, with merely more than half of people enjoying its three aspects of service except quality of treatment which gained satisfaction from 70% of patients.
　　Overall, among all the three wards, quality of treatment and after care arethe most favorableaspects of service while the other two aspects are less popular.(207 words)

　　Task 2
　　类型：社会类
　　原题回放
　　It is increasingly expensive to keep museums open to public.
　　What do you think is the best way to fund them(the government, businesses or individuals)
　　范文解析
　　博物馆对大众开放的成本越来越高，你认为支助博物馆的最佳方法是什么？（政府，企业还是个人）？
　　文章结构
　　P1：背景介绍 问题引入；
　　P2：来自政府的资金是最为稳定的；
　　P3：但是规模比较小的博物馆的资金主要来自于客户或团体；
　　P4：总结资金的最佳来源。
　　范文（红色加粗部分为重点词组/表达）
　　These days, museumis at the heart of communities, preserving essential local and national stories,which rewards visitors with fresh ideas. However, over the past years, one museum after another across the country hascut back ontheir business hours, staff and their salaries since it is increasingly expensive tofundthem and maintain themaccessible tothe general public.Therefore,whether the funding comes from the government or other sourcesis controversial.
　　First and foremost,the financial help contributed by government is well-managed and it is stable.Since the government pay money for some professional workers on runningmuseums, the management of the fund is naturally well-organized. Also, because the tax is a abundant resource of income, the help formuseumswill not stop easily.A successful case in point isLos Angeles County Museum of Art in the United States. In the past decade, it drew significant authorities to invest approximately 1 million dollars per year, which makes it the most popular museum in California. If the government fails to spend enough money on the Los Angeles County Museum of Art, the popularity of it may decline.
　　Admittedly, some largest and most prestigious art museums are likely to draw support from the authorities or large corporations by producing moreblockbuster exhibitions. However,fiscal pressureson those especially smaller and mid-sized institutions is increasingly competitive and important.In response to the problem, a variety of means to raise revenues at museums are through attracting their potential customers by holding exhibitions and cultural activities. Besides, board members from large cooperations are typically prominent individuals of communities and have access to otherprominentcommunity members who tend to be significantdonors.
　　In short, museums are spending more onfundraisingefforts than in previous years. The availability offunds from official bodiesare therefore more likely to be stable, however, smaller museums might turn to their communities or potential customers.(331 words)