大陆区雅思A类写作分享

　　下面小编跟大家一起了解大陆区雅思A类写作Task 2考官范文来了！各位小伙伴们写的怎么样呢，可以在下方一起讨论哦~
　　全新例文如下
　　2019年10月10日大陆区
　　题目：
　　Some people think that the best way to reduce the crimes by young people is to educate their parents with parental skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
　　青少年犯罪减少的很佳方式是父母的教育能力提高
　　主题：观点类
　　题目类型：Advantages/Disadvantages
　　（重复2017年9月30日亚太）
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　　Some people think that the best way to reduce the crimes by young people is to educate their parents with parental skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
　　青少年犯罪减少的很佳方式是父母的教育能力提高
　　The increasing rate of youth crime is plaguing a myriad of contemporary societies worldwide. The causes behind this worrying social phenomenon are complex, so it is inappropriate to only blame the lack of parental skills and assume that providing parenting training is the best solution.
　　Firstly, it must be stressed that juvenile delinquency is attributed to numerous internal and external factors, not all of which are household-related. Admittedly, some domestic problems, such as domestic violence and divorce, may contribute to youngsters' gradual formation of negative life attitudes and misbehaviours, for instance, due to parents' undesirable influence and offspring's natural inclination to imitate the older family members. Nevertheless, it is hard for parental guidance to counteract all the adverse social impacts on the young generation. The difference in the living environment between a wealthy or well-educated community and a slum full of gangsters may lead to distinct consequences, unspeakable traumas may result from peer influence, ranging from bullying to discrimination, at school, and adolescents' mind may be twisted by controversial information on modem media, such as violence, pornography, and anti-social thoughts, to name but a few. These cannot be entirely addressed simply by parental guidance because of its limitations in screening all the negative social influences from multiple sources.

　　Moreover, even for the roots that could be prevented or eradicated by proper parental guidance, there is no guarantee that the skills can be well-mastered by all parents once the training is provided. Some parents' personalities, such as introversion and impatience, may hinder the effectiveness of certain favourable communication skills aimed at identifying teenagers’psychological issues buried deep in their heart and tackling them by giving timely attention, encouragement, inspiration, and counsel via frequent open conversation. Likewise, without sufficient time spent with family, some parents, who even have a good command of these skills, may lack opportunities to notice some subtle changes in children's behaviours, life habits and social circles, let alone to take necessary measures immediately and accordingly.
　　All in all, there is no doubt that parental guidance plays a vital role in helping young people distinguish right from wrong and grow into a law-abiding citizen. Having said that, I cannot side with the thought that this the optimal approach for its limitations in non-domestic causes and applications in reality are not taken into consideration.
　　这道题目对于小伙伴们来说，难度处于中等，还是比较容易写的哦~
　　1. 题目包含词best, 这种情况下推荐写不同意，好写。
　　2. 不论是同意不同意，题目中的方法to educate parents with parental skills 都应该是优先且重点讨论的内容，至少占有一半的篇幅。文章不能大部分篇幅写别的办法。