雅思写作怎么打破六分魔咒 雅思考试

　　5. Government should take immediate measures to protect our environment.
　　可数名词不能单独使用。这里 government 是可数名词，所以在句子中要么用 governments, 要么特指 the government。
　　6. University students receive training on job-related skills is necessary.
　　又是一句读起来朗朗上口，受汉语语意影响的句子。这个句子中有 receive 和 is 两个动词，但是没有涉及到从句。university students receive training on job-related skills 已经是个完整的句子，所以要用形式主语从句 it is necessary that university students receive training on job-related skills.
　　7. The number of female students in this university is higher than male students.
　　比较成份要一致。这句前边主语是 the number， 后边比较对象是 male students，所以正确的方式是 The number of female students in this university is higher than the number of male students. 或者 The number of female students in this university is higher than that of male students.
　　 8. Newspapers exert such tremendous influence that they cannot only bring about major changes to the lives of ordinary people but to the government ’ s decision.Both ...and/ not only … but also/ A and B 都属于并列结构，前后连接成份要一致。这句 not only 后边是动词短语，but 后确是 to the government ’ s decision。所以我们可以改成 Newspapers exert such tremendous influence that they cannot only bring about major changes to the lives of ordinary people but affect the government ’ s decision。

　　9. Although teenagers may be included in family decisions, but they are not ultimately responsible.
　　这个句子的错误在雅思口语中经常见到，也是受汉语语意影响，但是在英语中 although 和 but 都是连词，在句子中只能有一个。同样 because 和 so 也是一个道理。
　　10. Which kinds of knowledge and skills should universities provide has been argued for many years.
　　语序错误。主语从句，宾语从句都可以用疑问词 what/which/ whether 等引导，但一定要记住，后边加正常语序的句子。should universities provide 语序错误，应该是 which kinds of knowledge and skills universities should provide has been argued for many years，是 which kinds of 引导的主语从句。
　　这十个雅思句子语法错误都是在教学中发现的比较低级和常见的错误，其实，雅思口语和写作可以使用简单句式，但是一定要确保句子准确，这样才能提高分数实现突破。