雅思作文如何拿高分 雅思考试

　　3.It means less commuting
　　4.It allows employees to arrange something special, including travelling to distant places and attending training classes
　　5.People will have fewer health issues and improve a feeling of well-being
　　Disadvantages:
　　1.Longer working hours – some companies might ask workers to work the same number of hours in the work day or cancel weekends
　　2.It does not suit everyone and every business
　　敲重点
　　 相对而言,休假的好处比较好写。
　　 从health/relationship/work and life balance出发都可以写,言之成理即可,尽量表达出更丰富的语言细节——比较容易掌握的内容。

　　 要尽可能使用复杂的句式(多个从句的适当嵌套),花样的固定搭配,和丰富的同义替换词,以尽量使得自己的文章区分于别的同学的文章,在Lexical Resource和Grammatical Range两个评分点上得到更多的分数.
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　　示例范文
　　 Most of the employees hold the view that less working hours and relatively longer holidays usuallyprovoke their enthusiasm to works. First thing first,it isworking less thatallows people time and energy which can be put into other things, which promotes their happiness and welfare. This is because work is increasingly consuming every aspect of people’slives. From commuting to undertaking long hours and checking emails out of the office – it’s difficult to know when the working week starts and ends. However, worker productivity relies not just on the number of hours put in, but on the well-being of staffand, as isubiquitously acknowledged, shorter working weeks can mean fewer sick days, fewer in-work accidents and mistakes, and higher worker motivation on the job. (126 words)